Lord Bracknell , I feel bound to tell you that today i experienced a quite absurd situation.A man so called Worthing who was not in my list of eligible young man attempted to marry our daughter , an unspoiled nature like Gwendolen.His aproach seemed sensible at first as Mr Worthing owned a country house,but I say my excitement did not endure long enough as he did not have any relations.Being part of the aristocracy has high demands.You are aware of this as much as me.Allowing this young man to marry our Gwendolen is surely not a wise or lucrative choice to make.Lord Bracknell it is apparent that we will decide who she will marry,if your health permits you.It appears to be that this mutual decision may be down to myself only.It is hardly a matter that our young daughter will be permitted to engage for herself regardless of the young man's demeanor.
I am unsure if there is anything close to insanity in the air of Hertfordshire but the number of engagements taking place are above the normal average.I am sure that you cannot disagree as I,Lady Bracknell of the British Aristocracy have a propensity to be correct.
Briefly after departing from Lady Harbury's house which resembled twenty years younger after her poor husband 's death, I decided to pay our young Algernon a short visit.Something was very strange.Indeed very eccentric that his friend Bunbury was ill again.Bunbury needs to make his mind up whether he wants to live or die.Algernon and yourself are aware that I do not approve any empathy towards invalids.But I must say that I am delighted that Algernon agreed to expurgate French songs from my programme.They make me feel ambivalent which is rather immaterial from my perspective.
Meanwhile Lay down,and do not sleep with covers on.I must say covers make you feel better as they assist the cold.
www a good attempt to capture the voice and tone of Lady B. Her sense of outrage is palpable.
ReplyDeleteebi however, this is again too riddled with errors not only typos and syntax but some word choices too. The attempt is overwhelmed by the flaws and this will reduce your mark dramatically.
Structurally, as well this is not fluent enough. You need to spend a little more time on planning before leaping into the writing itself. In the exam, this planning time is well worth spending.